Guest Posted April 1, 2011 Share Posted April 1, 2011 i apologize for my absence, and my aggravation that was displayed recently. i have returned to present a writing of mine, which all of you can relate to im sure. THE BEAST i awake from sleep, and put on my fatigues i brew my beans, and prepare for battle against the beast an almighty creature who has never experienced defeat he stands tall as trees, my height does not exceed his knees his teeth. . . razor sharp, his claws . . . the same the pain he inflicts, cannot be explained he feeds on tears and other's ignorance steals smiles without leaving a fingerprint he cannot be stopped, only put to sleep with the bluest fruit, or the purest air i can breathe the bell rings, whether im ready or not he stomps his feet, and my body drops he attacks with a force that explodes like c4 strong enough to make a river flow backwards, when he reaches the shore he brings heat, as hot as the sun and will break your legs if you try to run he kills his victim's spirits, but leaves no bruise or blood once he takes everything, its not enough, because to him, this is fun his methods are demonic, how he makes one eye cry and those that know him, will surely testify its just a "daily" nightmare, with no safe place to hide he is always with you, in your brain is where he resides when the beast awakens, it's you he wants to slay u may survive the battle, but the war continues the following day AO Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tingeling Posted April 1, 2011 Share Posted April 1, 2011 You described it so good i felt the words as i read them.... Thank you for being here Agent. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bonkers Posted April 1, 2011 Share Posted April 1, 2011 Hi AO, Nice to see you're back. Scary, exceptionally sad poem. Very well written. Obviously not your first. A talent I wasn't aware of. It's going to be tough getting rid of those frightening images, even if I decide that I want to. The new avatar is totally cool! Ron Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted April 1, 2011 Share Posted April 1, 2011 Thank you for being here Agent. i am always there, even if you do not see me Nice to see you're back. Scary, exceptionally sad poem. Very well written. Obviously not your first. A talent I wasn't aware of. It's going to be tough getting rid of those frightening images, even if I decide that I want to. The new avatar is totally cool! thank you for the compliments, as far as the avatar, its fan art from the tv show "southpark" and i need to mirror the image so it coincides with my right eye AO Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hipshot Posted April 1, 2011 Share Posted April 1, 2011 Hi there Brian. See if we can get Pink Floyd to put It to music and you will be rich. Glad to see you on the board. Dan Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kaboom Posted April 2, 2011 Share Posted April 2, 2011 Very disturbing - you did an excellent job. I've missed you, AO.  Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pixie-elf Posted April 5, 2011 Share Posted April 5, 2011 Awesome descriptions, and writing. Glad to see you back. It's normal to get aggravated and fed up hon. Mystina Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
1EYEcries Posted February 27, 2013 Share Posted February 27, 2013 Just wanted to bring my poem back up in the mix of things. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jessica-MTL Posted March 1, 2013 Share Posted March 1, 2013 Just wanted to bring my poem back up in the mix of things. You're AgentOrange? The poem is really good. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
spiny Posted March 1, 2013 Share Posted March 1, 2013 Glad to see you back on the board AO! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
1EYEcries Posted March 1, 2013 Share Posted March 1, 2013 You're AgentOrange? The poem is really good. Yes I am, and thank you Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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